Tariq is proving to be a fascinating character, indeed! A cripple in the military, eighteen, likely using a false surname, having nightmares… I can’t wait to see what story he has to tell!
This is where I should start! Your description of war is intriguing. Riveting to me. Your character work if very good.
It also made me think of Gaza. Rivers of discarded shoes, or piles of them, in the case of the Nazis, are terrifying, evocative images. I am an enemy of prologues but What a masterly write!
Just found this for the first time - was it written before Chapter 1 or not? What a cool intro to the story - currently burning through the rest!
Tariq is proving to be a fascinating character, indeed! A cripple in the military, eighteen, likely using a false surname, having nightmares… I can’t wait to see what story he has to tell!
I hope you enjoy it. Thank you for reading!
Intriguing start!
Thank you for reading!
I read it!!!
This is where I should start! Your description of war is intriguing. Riveting to me. Your character work if very good.
It also made me think of Gaza. Rivers of discarded shoes, or piles of them, in the case of the Nazis, are terrifying, evocative images. I am an enemy of prologues but What a masterly write!
Thank you so much for reading!!
I appreciate the feedback, I'm always looking to improve 👻
Good! You’re work is fantastic! Don’t discredit where you are.
This piece was awesome 💯. Looking for more readings
Eager to read the next installment!
Intriguing...can't wait to read more