The development of the relationship between Tariq and the other boys is beautiful. I always value the idea of hard earned friendship in stories, and these wanderers are indeed earning each others trust and even love. Wonderful drawing!
This was awesome. Loved the intensity of the scene and the descriptive nature of the fight. Tariq is not to be messed with. The gore was great. You were able to fit a lot of action in a small scene and the pace of the read felt comfortable and engaging. Seems like the rest of the crew is pretty lost without Tariq. He seems to be making all the tough choices. I really admire you creating the artwork as well. It reminds me of a mix between Kingdom Hearts and Tim Burton. Well done. Keep it going.
Thank you so much!! I appreciate this so much especially since writing fight scenes is a slog for me, I have to edit until I'm sick of it 🤦 so thanks for the encouragement
The development of the relationship between Tariq and the other boys is beautiful. I always value the idea of hard earned friendship in stories, and these wanderers are indeed earning each others trust and even love. Wonderful drawing!
Thank you so much for reading and for the feedback. Yes, I hope eventually Tariq can start to let down his guard around them poor baby
This was awesome. Loved the intensity of the scene and the descriptive nature of the fight. Tariq is not to be messed with. The gore was great. You were able to fit a lot of action in a small scene and the pace of the read felt comfortable and engaging. Seems like the rest of the crew is pretty lost without Tariq. He seems to be making all the tough choices. I really admire you creating the artwork as well. It reminds me of a mix between Kingdom Hearts and Tim Burton. Well done. Keep it going.
Thank you so much!! I appreciate this so much especially since writing fight scenes is a slog for me, I have to edit until I'm sick of it 🤦 so thanks for the encouragement